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The Gathering Forces

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Carrion birds soar over head reaping the benefits of the battle.  The lush grasslands sway as the husks of Rahkshi lie dormant lifeless, ownerless, a sound of something alive is heard.  Out-reaches a clawed hand into the air as if to try and catch the birds overhead.  It lands and grabs hold of the surface and pulls itself out of the rubble.  A Rahkshi head is seen emerging from its fallen comrades, and it is very heavily armored and was once called son, it commanded armies of unknown size and led its armies without fear or remorse.  Krootai the once grand general of the Brotherhood armies emerges weak from the ordeal of freeing himself from the dead.  "Brother" is heard echoing as if in a canyon.  He looks across the bodies of his fallen brothers to seek the one who just spoke.  "Brother" is heard again in the same manner Krootai stands up quickly for in response to the calling.  "Help" is now heard he starts hurriedly to enact the rescue from which the voice demands.  It speaks again and this time he finds the source and starts to dig.  "You are close Brother I can feel you" the voice speaks again.  And at this Krootai starts faster for he knows of whom the source is.  Suddenly a stop he touches something and it moved in reaction then Krootai knew he had found the voice.  Then all around him the rubble and remains floated into the air and held their positions and as they floated beings rose from the ground.  The dead seemed to rise and all around Rahkshi and even some Visorak appeared from the rubble that was recently their tomb.  And Krootai knew who's doing this was because he always was soft-hearted for his allies.  He gazes down and spots his brother who was much more powerful than himself which was saying much and his brother even could rival Father's powers but he always was at his command like some rahi pet.  This comrade also was a grand general of the Brotherhood and even was granted an entire island for his success like The Fathers themselves.  And Taruk turns his head to acknowledge his brother for he had already seen him.  He speaks but it is echoed, "I' am sorry about this I should've foreseen this."  Krootai hisses but no words come and Taruk responds "Thanks for your comfort brother."  (Spoken in Rahkshi) "What will we do now Taruk, can you sense father do you know if he is even alive?"  "I don't know." Spoke Taruk as he propped himself up.  "But I thought you could do that!?!"  "I can but I feel incredibly drained from the battle."  "I noticed you saved a few."  "YES! I couldn't let them die like that!"  "Sorry I didn't mean to upset you."  "No, no, I overreacted."  "Generals," announced a Rahkshi, "what are your orders."  Krootai spoke first, "Trooper gather what survivors you can we will regroup to the caves we shall build up our armies there until we can find somewhere else to have our base."  "What of Makuta?" The Rahkshi inquired.  "We shall think the worst and that his backup plan failed." Supposed Taruk, who spoke as if it hurt.  Krootai helped him to his feet and started barking orders.  Taruk felt safe in his brother's arms because he knew that Krootai would never let anything harm him.  The surviving members of the army started searching the rubble for others that may have lived the fall of Makuta.  And as they gather an Agori spots the armies and flees the scene to warn the forces that fought to destroy the very evil below that now gathers.
Okay now that was fast. :D

Here is the full story.

Characters in order of apperance:
General Krootai
General Taruk
Some Rahkshi
Rahkshi Trooper Class
Some Visorak
Teridax
An Agori

P.S. Taruk is not Gay :furious: if any of you were thinking that stop he loves Krootai like a Brother.

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Mate397's avatar
quite interesting story i must say :P
i'm surprised nobody commented :O